I am writing this star wars fanfiction, about a Sith Lord named Darth Vertogan. You can read more about him on this link:

http://swfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Darth_Vertogan

So Vertogan is basically a sad man to whom, life has never been fair at all. He was born as a nameless street orphan with a wimpy body and really low midichlorian count. After a series of events, where he overcomes all his physical disabilities and turns into a vengeful Sith Lord, Vertogan becomes a person who chokes his former childhood crush, remorselessly kills his best friend, holds the Grandmaster for ransom and saves the galaxy from genocide so that he can rule it.

Vertogan is the master of all the lightsaber forms (like Mace Windu and Kas'im), one of the most powerful Sith Lords (as he has the strongest midichlorians) and is skilled in Biotechnology (like the Yuuzhan Vong). However he totally sucks at Sith Sorcery and Alchemy. This nearly defeats him in the Sith Civil War.

I'll update the page on Sunday and please leave comments below the page. I'd like feedback, positive, negative, mixed, but no insults.

Please reply as soon as you can, and some tips for improvement.