I'm working on the second chapter of my novel. It's basically about this girl who is saved by her "big brother". Notice the quotes. He's not really her big brother.
I decided that it wouldn't work if they both lived in different parts of the town. I named it Clearwater. I think there's a town called Clearwater in Florida but I didn't know if it had like two parts. So, I had to make it up. I made her dad have a promotion so they move to the nicer part of Clearwater. Naturally, she meets a family from across the street. The family of the boy who saved the main character, Haley. Does that sound cliché? I know in some cases, cliché is okay. But, I really didn't know what else to do in chapter two.. I'm currently working on it at: http://www.wattpad.com/user/tiredandhungry
Check it out if you want. But, only the first chapter is up. I use lots of detail but I'm worrying if I have enough of Haley's personality in the writing since it's in 1st person. If you think this idea is absolutely atrocious, please give me suggestions to include in the second chapter. I'm just a beginner but I love to write.
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i like the cliche,it seems to work here and given the chance id read more.
hope it works for you :)
Wow it's nice to know that there are other people that believe in writing and love doing it. I'm a kind of beginner (because I always wrote stories in my life, from age like 5 to age 11 my age now. But I'm not so good at it so I call myself a beginner). I didn't check your story out yet because I'm on my iPod right now so i can't follow your link. But I'll email you and you email me cause I can't answer again and tell you if I like it or not. Email me at [email protected]. I'll reply as fast as I can, and I'll check out the story in a minute.
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