..... How do you handle that when writing a novel?
Choice 1 (a): Joe said, “Well maybe you need to visit a bar.”
Choice 1 (b): Joe said, “well maybe you need to visit a bar.”
Choice 2 (a): Joe said, “Well, maybe you need to visit a bar.”
Choice 2 (b): Joe said, “well, maybe you need to visit a bar.”
(In my novel, I don’t want Joe to pause between the word “Well” and the word “maybe”. Is it okay to not use a comma between those words?)
PS: Some software programs flag you, in the above case, if you Capitalize "W", and some software programs flag you if you use the lower case "w". Would you capitalize it or not?
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Choice 2a is correct.
If I had written it any of the other ways in English class, it would have been marked wrong.
edit: I answered according to "proper" English; I wasn't considering dialects. But SSF is right if you're writing the way people talk, like Mark Twain did.
1a would fit your needs the best. Yes it should be capitalized.
I believe there is flexibility here in choosing the comma placement. If there is no pause in the characters speech, then I agree you should eliminate the comma.
I was just reread "The Great Gatsby" recently, which includes some interesting commentary in the back of the book. In the first paragraph, the original editor added something like 6 commas that he thought belonged there. In the revised text, they were all taken out. The commentator mentioned that Fitzgerald had what he referred to as a "perfect ear" for how to write dialogue, and that the original was far superior to what the editor had changed it to, even if the editor was following more generally-accepted form.
Usually Choice 2 (a) but it depends. *Does* Joe pause between "well" and "maybe"? Use a comma if he does; don't if he doesn't. It's all in how he says it.
Edit: Yeah, it's fine not to use a comma if you don't want him to pause between "well" and "maybe." You definitely need to capitalize the "w" in "well."
2(a) is technically correct.
However, I doubt that anyone except a very strict editor (or English teacher) would fault you for 1(a).