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It's almost correct. You just need to change the verb and 'suki' around.

Try this one: わたしは おんがくを きくのが すきです。

When you want to say that you like to do something it uses the pattern ~(dictionary verb form)+のがすきです。

No.

In Japanese you have to make "to listen to music" into a noun. As you know, ongaku o kikimasu is a verb. In order to change it into a noun you need to put kikimasu into its plain form (kiku) and follow it with either no or koto.

わたしはおんがくをきくのがすきです

or

わたしはおんがくをきくことがすきです

Koto is more formal than no.