bonjour,
svp pouvez vous me corriger cette petite paragraphe en anglais, si biensur vous comprenez ce que je voulais dire ?
I'm a lodger,I live in a flat,but always i dreamed to live in a big house , so the solution is have a lot of monney
in future if i will be rich, i will be build a big house with a lot of room.
a traditionelle vast sitting room, and in the middle of the sitting room a round staircase link up the sitting room and the second floor.
and an swimming pool, and nuresry fom my childreen.
merci
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- I'm a lodger,I live in a flat,but I have always dreamt of living in a big house so the solution would be earning a lot of money.
In the future if i am rich, i will build a big house with a lot of rooms:
a traditional vast sitting room and ,in the middle of the sitting room, a round staircase which would relate the sitting room to the second floor.
I would also have a swimming pool, and nursery room for my children.
Stéphane a raison.
I am a lodger and live in a flat; but I have always dreamed of living in a big house. The solution is have a lot of money. In the future, if I am rich, I will build a big house with a lot of room. There will be a spacious traditional sitting room, in the middle of which will be a spiral staircase to the second floor. There will be a swimming pool and a nursery for my children.
I'm a lodger. I live in a flat, but I always dreamed of living in a big house, so the solution is to have alot of money.
In the future if I am rich, I will build a big house with a lot of room.
A traditional, vast living room, and in the middle of the sitting room a round staircase to link the the sitting room to the second floor, a swimming pool, and a nursery for my children
Bon Suete!
all right with Stephan Koening
I'm a lodger, I live in a flat, but I have always dreamt/dreamed of living in a big house. So the solution would be earning a lot of money.
In the future if I am rich, I will build a big house with MANY rooms:
a traditional vast sitting room and, in the middle of IT, a round staircase which would relate the LATTER to the second floor.
I would also have (gotten)/get a swimming pool, and A nursery room for my children.
Répétition 2 x de always: ça ne va pas
Dreamt mais dreamed est bcp plus employé
Beaucoup: le mieux c'est "many" ou "lotta" ou "lotsa" en américain.
Latter: pour éviter la répétition (le contraire de "latter" est "former".)
Ne pas oublier de mettre des majuscules: I et non i etc.
I'm a lodger living in a flat. I have, however,always dreamed of living in a big house, which will require a lot of money. If in the future I ever become rich, I plan to build a big house with many rooms and a lot of space: a traditional huge sitting room and,in the middle of the sitting room, a spiral staircase connecting the sitting room with the second floor. I also plan a swimming pool, and nursery for my childreen.
(En Europe le rez de chaussée + le premier étage: au Canada le premier étage + le deuxième étage.)