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Very profound, and sad.

You feel like you could reach out and touch him

and take him to a doctor

and make everything OK

and find those searched

looted memories

of Mom,Sister, Brother and Dad

Better I could die...then this state

( wow, heart hurt)

and no one even to help

dig my grave ( no one cares, lonely hurt )

Struggling with fear ( keeping me alive )

I have my last labor to do for me

(bagging someone)

give me some place

to dig my grave

( please )

some place

to dig my grave

Good-bye

Well, that's how it felt to walk the last mile of the way, my companion death.

I felt a 10 for the poem, every mile of the way. Thank you. Sincerely, mario

Mother Teresa (26 August 1910 – 5 September 1997), born Agnes Gonxha Bojaxhiu

(pronounced [aɡˈnɛs ˈɡɔndʒe bɔjaˈdʒiu]), was a Catholic nun of Albanian ethnicity and Indian citizenship, who founded the Missionaries of Charity in Kolkata, India in 1950.

For over 45 years she ministered to the poor, sick, orphaned, and dying,

while guiding the Missionaries of Charity's expansion,

first throughout India and then in other countries.

Following her death she was beatified by Pope John Paul II

and given the title Blessed Teresa of Calcutta.

She is the one that wouldn`t forsake thee

She `s now living in Heaven

but her soul is roaming from street to street

meet her if you wish,meet her if you need

She has a place for everyone.

Be it from India or Pakistan.

Tell her you`re Zahid

and she will see to it....

It could also be titled 'Despair'. Your poems 'paint' a vivid picture of the subject you write about.

Congrats Zahid! You've impressed the judges, keep it up.

Poem: 7.37

My understanding:

"See That My Grave Is Kept Clean"

Blind Lemon Jefferson

Well there's one kind of favor I'll ask for you

Well there's one kind of favor I'll ask for you

There's just one kind of favor I'll ask for you

You can see that my grave is kept clean

And there's two white horses following me

And there's two white horses following me

I got two white horses following me

Waiting on my burying ground

Did you ever hear that coffin sound

Did you ever hear that coffin sound

Did you ever hear that coffin sound

Means another poor boy is under the ground

Did you ever hear them church bells toll

Did you ever hear them church bells toll

Did you ever hear them church bells toll

Means another poor boy is dead and gone

And my heart stopped beating and my hands turned cold

And my heart stopped beating and my hands turned cold

And my heart stopped beating and my hands turned cold

Now I believe what the Bible told

And there's one last favor I'll ask for you

And there's one last favor I'll ask for you

And just one last favor I'll ask for you

You can see that my grave is kept clean

id give it a 5 but dont let my opinion go to your head or anything