Is ‘thereby’ necessary in ‘Students play in hospitals, thereby gaining a deeper awareness of music’s therapeutic power’? If so, why? If not, why?
Update:So, is ‘Students play in hospitals, gaining a deeper awareness of music’s therapeutic power’ correct?
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Not really. You only use "thereby" if you want added emphasis. As a more understated statement you can even write : "Students gain a deeper awareness of music’s therapeutic power by playing in hospitals."